The job description provides a good overview of the role, requirements, and responsibilities. However, it includes some repetitive and irrelevant content, such as the company background details that are duplicated and not directly related to the job responsibilities. Additionally, the salary and questionnaire sections are presented as questions, which may be better formatted as part of an application process rather than within the job description itself.
To improve clarity and professionalism, I will remove the duplicated company background, reformat the questions for clarity, and ensure the description is concise and focused on the role.
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Sales Engineer • Jakarta Pusat, Jawa, Indonesia